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I can't seem to cry
But the clouds are willing
Anger and pain are forefront
Of my mind. So soon?

I dread your disinterest
And dream your wanting
Rebuke myself for caring.

I scoff at my emotions
As they are only to be
Expected. What did I think
Would go right this time?

I'm tired of taking skeletons
Out of my closet. Where's my
Body to bring back to life?

If you didn't care, cut the strings
And sever my ties
Or leave me in peace to lick my wounds
Don't keep me hanging
I'm strangling in this dance

I'm too proud to go begging
Too loyal to leave willingly
Too dense to tell anyone
How I feel.
Give up or give in.
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:icon4moku2:
I don't like either choice, but I do like this poem. A wonderful exploration of emotion. :) :) :)

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I'd rather know I was crazy than think I was sane.

~Member of the 3eyes [link] club! Inanely Inspired Insanity~ =)
:iconxxforgtmentxx:
Well, this is for someone else. I'm telling them to give up on me or give in and keep trying, keep going. But don't leave me hanging and don't play my strings. Thx.

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*I'm here, but not really present. See you in my dreams.*
XxforgetmenotxX
:icon4moku2:
I think you could just as easily apply this to yourself. :)

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I'd rather know I was crazy than think I was sane.

~Member of the 3eyes [link] club! Inanely Inspired Insanity~ =)
:iconxxforgtmentxx:
Sure. I could. But that wasn't the purpose. It was for my muse.

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*I'm here, but not really present. See you in my dreams.*
XxforgetmenotxX
:icon4moku2:
Then I shall hope for your muse that it is understood and appreciated. :)

--
I'd rather know I was crazy than think I was sane.

~Member of the 3eyes [link] club! Inanely Inspired Insanity~ =)
:iconxxforgtmentxx:
I just hope my muse is hearing me sometimes...I'm not sure the message is always received. But maybe that's how it's meant to be. Thank you.

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*I'm here, but not really present. See you in my dreams.*
XxforgetmenotxX
:icon4moku2:
I still haven't figured it out myself. :)

--
I'd rather know I was crazy than think I was sane.

~Member of the 3eyes [link] club! Inanely Inspired Insanity~ =)

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